The analysis is sufficiently thorough. You've covered most of the subjects you should for this kind of work. I only have some minor criticisms, all regarding presentation: - spend a few minutes proofreading each others texts; - be careful with typographical errors; - avoid using all capital letters; - try using less font types (see images 5 and 10. This is probably due to the work being done by 3 pairs of hands but nonetheless it could/should be avoided). - the side banner with the gradient is not effective.
In the future you should be more careful with these small (graphic) design aspects that can improve your presentation significantly.
Good job and I hope to see the next posts/stages with these aspects reviewed. ES
The analysis is sufficiently thorough. You've covered most of the subjects you should for this kind of work.
ReplyDeleteI only have some minor criticisms, all regarding presentation:
- spend a few minutes proofreading each others texts;
- be careful with typographical errors;
- avoid using all capital letters;
- try using less font types (see images 5 and 10. This is probably due to the work being done by 3 pairs of hands but nonetheless it could/should be avoided).
- the side banner with the gradient is not effective.
In the future you should be more careful with these small (graphic) design aspects that can improve your presentation significantly.
Good job and I hope to see the next posts/stages with these aspects reviewed.
ES